Sorry. But i was wondering if my story was any good if it is or isnt can you tell me please i really want to know so on my next story i know how to make it better. Sorry for interrupting... Thnxx.
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Chapter 3
So by then we had been trying to find them for almost 2months. We've been slowly catching them picking up which countries theyre going to so we had a pretty good idea of where they were going after each note. They were always at least 2 or 3 countries infront but eventually we were only 1 country behind we only stayed in a hotel once a week for a night. Me and Miki took turns driving so now after being with Miki for 6 months i got my green p's and soon i'll be fully licensed.
Because we didn't exactly know who we were looking for, we had quite a bit of trouble finding them. Miki had the slightest idea of what they looked like and that was it. We didn't know there names so that didn't help either. We got a piece of their face on a piece of paper once a month, which helped alot.
One night while we were watching the news we saw my mum and dad. They had been brutaly beaten then each arm were cut off before death thenn they were drownded... After hearing that i thought that it was the end of the world though it wasn't because i still had to catch those bastards who killed my parents and then they'll feel the torture my mum and dad went through but worse...!
