M I N E : HAMESHA : M A N A N (very slow updates)

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It starts from musicana's opening night..

After manan's 1st kiss, nandini went to back to her home, happily as she thought manik loves her ... And here manik was smiling and thinking about her.. and was just trying to absorb her presence from that place..

After 5 mins Dhruv comes with 93 roses..

DH : Buddy tu yaha kya kar raha hai. And nandini kaha hai.

Manik was smiling with closed eyes but when he heard Nandini's name.. And he gave him a Stern look.

MA : Why you are asking about nandini ???

DH : Why matlab I was going to propose her buddy... And I became late.. Shit.. how can I be soo careless....

Dhruv was more engrossed in himself that he didn't noticed the changes in manik.. When he got to know that he was going to propose Nandini. His nandini. He didn't heard anything after that, his mind is only occupied with the thought that he was going propose her. He lost his temper and punched him.

Dhruv was shocked to react and manik was just punching him... Aliya and Mukti who were searching for manik came there and saw this. They were also shocked to react.

After 15 mins or soo. Manik roared like a beast.

MA : How dare you? Huh how fucking dare you to think that you will propose nandini. She is mine you get it. S.H.E I.S J.U.S.T M.I.N.E.

AM I CLEAR TO YOU !!!!!

DH : ( shock would be a small word for Dhruv, he was astonished by his behaviour, and scaredly in a meeking voice said ) yyyyyy.............eeeeeee.............ssssssssss...........

MA : I didn't heard you Dhruv SAY IT LOUD AND CLEAR...

DH ( LOUDLY ): YES.

CABIR came there when he roared like a beast and started shouting that she is mine. He got it what would have happened. So he slowly went near manik and kept his hand on his shoulder..

CA ( calmly ): Manik clam down. Nandini kahi nahi jaa rahi hai. Chal let's go to Home. We will talk tomorrow.

Cabir gave a glance to Dhruv and he nodded looking at mukaliya. And dragged manik from there to his house.....

PS : imp note guy's.. cabir is not gay and he lives with his mom ... He likes navya but haven't said this to her as she likes Harshad.. So there will be no cabir's hospital scene or manan's jungle ( friendship drama to trap Harshad ) scenes.... Till muaicana everything is same. But these are some changes in it...

I hope I am clear.

So how is it???

Should I continue ???

Or do I have to change something ????

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