Shifting to Hogwarts

My script

I'm still editing and trying to add stuff to my script by this is what I have so far. Lol. I hope you enjoy reading it!

*music playing in the background* I open my eye to see a castle in front of me. I am in my desire reality. I stand up and look around.I notice I have a black robe with green in it. I smile to myself. Something touches my hand. It's him.Cedric,Cedric Diggory.Holy shit. I am actually at hogwarts. I MADE IT!!!!He smiles at me and takes my hand. Gosh his hand is so soft and warm wrapped around mine.He takes me to the castle. As we walk together I  wonder what year is it. I want to asked him but I don't want to look like an idiot. We reach the castle but before we go any further I finally asked him
"What year is it?"
"This is you're 3rd year at hogwarts"
I replied with a simple "oh"
That means he still has a year left...I nod and we move along.Someone starts yelling and pushing people
"Out of my way" "move it" "GET OUT OF MY WAY" "MOVE OVER" I spot his blonde hair. Oh no. I quickly grab Cedrics hand and try to blend in with the others. Before I have time to crouch down. Malloy stops me. Why did Cedric have to be so tall yet handsome. Everyone starts to form a circle around us.SHOOT.Draco gives Cedric a dirty look.I roll my eyes. I look at Cedric,he looks at me and leaves.fuck you Malfoy. I try to walk away like Cedric but Draco grabs my arm.He takes me to his dorm.Pins me to the wall.
"What is your problem?!"
"Problem? My problem is you" I try to not look at his face
"Why are you hanging out with a stupid Hufflepuff you are supposed to represent Slytherin"
"Fuck off" he throws me to the floor. I storm out. Crabbe looks at me confused I sit by him amd take his chocolate frog. 
"What happened?"
"Nothing just Draco being Draco"
"Mhm" we sit there quietly eating sweets
I start laughing at myself and he laughs along.love this boy.Pansy then sits in front of us. She sits up straight and says " i need your help cony,I need you to talk about me to Draco but tell him cute things about me" I  put my sweet in the table.Is she crazy?
"Excuse me?"
"Cony don't act dumb"Oop
"You talk to him all the time! And I like him I really do.Please Cony!!"ummm I stare at crabbe (should I tell her or you? No don't just go along)
" yeah sure I'll try to talk to him about you no problems"
"Thanks cony your the best" she hugs me and I give her a smile.
Crabbe amd I stare at each other he shrugs.
"SHUT UP CRABBE" he begins to laugh at me.
"It's getting late don't you should go to bed" I nod and leave.