The house by the Cemetery

Dares and ladies afar

Chapter 1

There was an eerie silence surrounding the graveyard. The trees hung low reaching towards the dead bodies. The misty fog made it unable to see past the fence closing the demons inside. It tried to reach out to find whatever happiness it could find outside the unpleasant souls in the night sky. It wasn't as though we had any happiness with us at the moment. We were all shaken to the bone. "I told you it was a bad idea, but did anyone listen no, no one listens to me". That was Carlos, my best friend." oh stop being such a baby, it's not scary" now this was Xavier, my other best friend. Even though he was saying he wasn't sacred you could clearly see that he was, I mean how wouldn't you be? We were standing in the middle of a graveyard at midnight. The moon shone over us, although we could barely see it with the mist everywhere. Curse the person whose idea it was to do this. When I get my hands-on Macy, the girl who though daring us to do this would make her look cool, ugh I can't think about that right now we needed to focus on spending the night here. "boys ... stop arguing... Can you see that it kinda looks like a ... house? We could stay in there". "no. I can't see anything, how would you expect me too there's fog everywhere" Xavier said. God, he thinks he's such a smarty pants. I grab both their arms and start to pull them toward the silhouette of the house, or whatever it is. "charlotte, I don't think that's a good idea, even if there is a house, it won't provide warmth and what if we won't be allowed inside most probably", I swear sometimes I think Carlos would be scared or anxious or a cat. "Carlos, we won't know if we don't check it out. Do you want to stand here all night cuz I don't?". He remains quiet so I take that as a no. We keep walking and the house starts to become clearer. It was like a mansion. A stone mansion. There were long green vines near the corners and a really tall tree sprouting twigs and roots everywhere. And the mansion had a really think looking door and about a dozen windows. i looked down and there were dead looking rose petals on the path we were walking on. I was a clear path, but I couldn't really distinguish was the path was made of. The mansion looked abandoned. "I don't think we should go in there; it looks stable an' all but I got a bad feeling 'bout this", "seriously Carlos, again all get are bad feelings." and they started bickering again. "Come on the both of you" I turn around to glare at the both of them when i see a silhouette staring right at me. she was a woman with dark flowy hair flying in the wind. She had a creepy big smile on her face. She was wearing a short sleeved long dress blowing in the wind. She lifter her hand and put up 5 of her fingers, then started to walk backwards ever so slowly. She looked right into my eyes as if to see i was going to look away. 

hi so this is the first story i am actually going to take siriously. i hope you like it. if you have any critisism please do let me know. soo ya. thanks for ready

02/10/2020