Review#5
Written by AbigailMoreno870
Reviewed by dallas1213
Aka Katherine
Chapter one:
Loved it! The plot was spot on! And I loved how you gave a little information on the parents:)
Ps:
I wish I looked like Amelia when I was twelve❤
Chapter two:
The relationship Amelia has with her father is truly wonderful and sweet❤
Ps:
I got a really good laugh at what Amelia said about Cassandra😂
Chapter three:
I already dislike Amanda, I mean she is acting like a brat. Yeah, I get it, it's hard to deal with family issues like that, but it's life and she needs to put her big girl pants on and be nice to Amelia. I mean it won't kill her to at least stop glaring at poor Amelia.
Chapter four:
I knew for a fact that women was unfaithful since we first were introduced to her.
Ps:
Very good job on the plot, you are making me feel what Amelia is going through❤
Note:
And when Cassandra said "What? can you guys stop looking at me like that I know I look beautiful like always."
I literally thought "Umm honey you are literally the only person who thinks that."
Chapter five:
Umm Amanda sorry to break it to you but the boy isn't looking at you, instead his eyes are on Amelia.
Ps:
When the boy kissed Amelia my jaw literally hit the ground! Like how does a twelve get her first kiss at TWELVE!!!! How!!!
Cover: 10/10
Plot: 15/15
Grammar: 8/10
Spelling: 10/10
Personal enjoyment: 10/10
Ok so the only thing I suggest that needs to be improved is your grammar, but other than that your is book is truly wonderful and I can't wait until you publish the sixth chapter❤
Have a wonderful day/night❤✨
(Ps thank you for giving me this opportunity to review your book❤)
-Katherine.
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