Mrs Pathan (On hold)

|Teaser: The Marriage.

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And Allah has plan the best ; as he was the best of the planner for us.

I Raised my head and met a pair of beautiful black eyes. I could feel my body shaking slightly as small room which was quite was now lifted to an uproar when he with his friends walked in. I, at that moment didn't knew the source of reality would come in front of me on the very day of my marriage.

With his tall muscular figure somewhat Six feet around ,tan skin, Raven hair strands falling loosely on his face and hideous scar on right side of his smooth jaw. He felt like an every inch of Pathan.

He was famous as Falcon ; Bird of Prey.

I couldn't look around too see pity, disbelief and look of mockery in thousands of villagers eyes present in the huge room.

Pity for the Famous Eagle getting hinged to his Brother's Widow.

Taking deep breaths I slowly looked in those comforting eyes of my mother , nodding my head softly and whispering to the elders that I agree to my nikkah to .......

" The Pathan".