Title: Look, I found you
Author: Cloudshewrites
CRITIQUE TIME
Title:
Okay lang siya.
Cover:
Maganda siya for me. Simple lang. I like the font.
Story description:
Interesting siya para sa akin pero konti lang kaya mas maganda kung dadagdagan.
Originality:
Meron siyang originality. Bet ko 'yung parang nag-forward 'yung time ta's wala siyang maalala. Sayang si crush. 🤣
Setting:
Malinaw ang setting niya.
characterization:
Okay siya. Malinaw.
Conflict and plot:
This is what I like about your story kasi first palang, pinakita na agad yung conflict. Okay na okay siya!
Technicalities:
❌ Pa'ko
✔️ Pa 'ko
❌ Anu-anong
✔️ Ano-anong
❌ Step mom
✔️ Step-mom
❌ i
✔️ I (Kasi you're referring to yourself)
❌ Aiissh
✔️ Ayst! ('Yan yung mas maganda but It's still up to you)
Remove this 👇(It's up to you parin)
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Feedback:
Nice siya! Maganda ang plot at interesting siya para sa akin. Isa ito sa mga babasahin ko someday kaya keep on updating writer! ❤
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