Gantz Extended Editors Addition Author Notes

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     Thanatos here to all readers giving his notes to what to expect from the upcoming chapters. Right so let's get right down to it These next few sentences probably applies mostly for the readers who read the original version of this Gantz story before i went in and changed some stuff to develop more of the story. So originally in the first version of the story we get maybe a scene or two of Y/n outside of the Gantz room/Missions why? Well originally i was planning to add more outside details post dino mission but during the writing where i wanted to take the story developed into something else and i decided if i wanted to do certain events Y/n needs to be more developed before certain events take place post dino mission or else any impact/feelings/motivations can be lost or just come off flat.  So what does that mean well in this new/and or extended addition whatever you guys what to think of it more scenes will be added, some scenes that allows to develop more from who he was in the original version i won't spoil that here for new readers who wants to read these notes to get an idea what they may be getting into but to the old readers his personality hasn't changed i don't what y'all to think he's suddenly now going to become a completely different character that was't the point of adding the scenes, the main point like i stated was just to help him i guess feel less one dimensional and make him feel more like a character readers can understand and what motivates him, and make him feel more complex. Which brings me to my next point for New and Older readers this is a mature story if you find darker themes upset you and will make you drop a story then this probably isn't the story for you, i'm not one to turn down readers my goal when writing is to have fun and create a story the readers can enjoy and in doing so if you feel like dropping the story because something might personally offend you or make you uncomfortable no hard feeling at least on my part i know while writing it that it might turn some people off and you can't make everyone happy some people just read Male reader stories to feel like an unstoppable bad-ass who get's every single girl without any hardships so let me say first that's not this type of story while the reader in this story might do something someone might consider bad-ass in no way is it meant to come off that way it's meant to make the readers at the very least question does the action really count as being cool or bad-ass if the price came at the expense of another, or does the ends really justify the means pretty much which brings me back to my main Point about Y/n he's not an evil character but he's definitely not good i would say he's a very moral dark grey character who has his own personal reasons for why he does things or the way he act's maybe this slightly spoils stuff but i want y'all to know what you are getting into before i get a message in my inbox getting mad at me XD lol so yeah. 

    As for the other point Gantz has tons of women but if you are expecting some harem stuff again sorry not for you, one because i just find harem's hard to do and the idea of trying to develop a relationship with multiple women confusing and tend to find most authors can't do it usually only one or two of the girls(which i assume are either the author's favorite or the one's readers voted for the most, not throwing shade at the authors that do things like that it's their story and they can do whatever the heck they want with it just not my cup of tea and i feel like it's disappointing to the readers who might want to see their reader insert interact with someone only for them to never really show up until the author randomly remembers them ). So Yeah i'll state this right now the Main romantic interest is Reika and while she is the Main romantic interest this isn't really a fluffy romance story so do expect either of them to be love sick puppies constantly stuck on each other the real world doesn't work that way couples do have problems. Y/n isn't some perfect human being who Reika will worship the ground he walks on (again not throwing shade this even isn't even completely directed at author of male reader inserts this is more directed at the actual Gantz writer who took a character who could've developed into something interesting and instead just made her a Kurono fan boy who seems to live and breathe just for Kurono, and i'm also just trying to keep this story realistic while still bending some rules. Even i admit i'm guilty of tending to do the more fluffy love sick puppies stuff or flirting with the idea of a harem in my one piece story so i might be bit of a hypocrite and y'all shouldn't take everything i say serious lol XD ) So yeah while this isn't a harem story (i consider a harem to be anything more than three so i guess 4+, why because one romantic interest is just you know i guess a monogamous relationship, two would be more like a love triangle Person A is dating person B and C and whatever feeling B and C share could range from anything to also dating each other, to being competitive for more of person's A attention, or having no interest in each other but not feeling any animosity towards each other, or anything else really. But three adds a whole bunch of mess on who feels what towards who anyway but in a way can still be manageable getting side track as far as i'm concerned four romantic interest is a harem. Thanatos why is this important? because like i said Y/n main romantic interest is Reika but that doesn't mean he won't be in a relationship with someone else and i find that's where the meat of Y/n's character will develop along with Reika feeling's towards him and what she feels since that allows me to develop them in my own way. So yeah not a harem story but not a single relationship story either. 

   Really getting side track so i'll wrap this up for New readers please enjoy and for returning readers please enjoy and a big thank you for sticking with me i'm not perfect when it comes to writing but i do try my best to write for  y'all and i can understand how frustrating it is to enjoy a story and have to wait forever for updates and i won't promise to be consistent with updates that's just not possible with me real life get's in the way and this is a side side side hobby for me but as long as even one reader sticks with the story i won't randomly just drop it and even if it takes me forever i will finish this story. At the moment i'm posting a few chapters up until the end of the second mission that way it allow's new readers to take the chance to read it and catch up while allowing returning reader if they feel like it to see what's new with this version of the story instead of skipping straight to where they left off and being confused (sucks yeah i know and i expect some or most of you are probably going to be mad at me lol but i feel like some of the new stuff will make the story better). 

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