Apfrang 🐺 broken on the inside

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Author apfrang

This book is listed as having major editing done. It seemed to skip months and the flow seems off. The storyline is there and if she does the major editing with expansion of ideas without so many time jumps it could become a great book.  She just seem to forget that best friends turned their back on her. Then all the sudden best friend from childhood is best friend again. When all in her pack hated her they said for killing the Luna. When it was her mom the beta's wife. Then the baby should of lived and been a baby vampire. She referred someone as wife when it should of been fiancée. It was thing like that which would have me scratching my head. Then you realized she was mislabeling them. She does have a good base of the story but as I said needs major editing. So hopefully by the time you get here you will have the major editing done.

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