A new life

A new start

I was 16 and had at least 4 best friends, jack, Henry, Brandon, and Robert. We were of course being stupid trying to ice skate on this pond at my house it was always thick and I slipped, we where testing the ice on the side I was so stupid to get on it more in the deep part and that's when everything went wrong it started to crack and Brandon stopped and looked over and so did jack and Henry. Robert ( rj) was always caring and I liked him and he liked me, we both knew we like liked each other a little, but besides the point. The ice cracked I was terrified I stopped and stayed still as Brandon and jack, & Henry stared in shock. Rj reached for my hand but could not grab my hand. " stay still we'll get help" he says trembling. " you can't there's no time" says Henry and I was shocked that he did so I stood still as the idiot Brandon got on the ice and I jumped for it and it crashed I fell in the freezing ice cold water. My brain was shocked and stopped working for about a minute. I saw there figures and I felt my blood run cold and my vision blur. I felt myself being pulled out of the water and I saw blurry people before my vision was caving in with darkness. I blinked and then darkness I was dying. { so anyone like it? I hope you did and please comment, & like}