Hey guys just a little feedback

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Hi! For those of you who are reading my story please give me feed back and comment! I would really really really really appreciate it! If you think I should add something just let me know! I don't mind! 

Anyways..... enjoy!



The end of the day already came to a end. I exited the school through the back. And sat in my special space not knowing that I was being followed....


I sat down on the grass and put on my headphones and started to draw. I was drawing that boy. I think there's something wrong with me. Like seriously why do I keep thinking about him. I've never felt this way. It kind of feels like the time my dog threw up on my aunt and I was laughing like crazy and she was too. I felt bubbly and sparky. Yeah... sparky.

A hand was reaching towards me and I didn't know. But I felt like something was close. You know like when you feel something is watching you and you get paranoid well that's how I felt. felt a cool hand touch my should.

"EEEK!" I screamed and my reflexes sprung into action. I didn't care who or what was there but it was a no no for touching! I knew I probably kicked the thing or person a couple times.

I stopped when I didn't hear anything. I looked around and saw him. That boy. His hands were in between his legs and he looked in pain. My eyes went wide. I didn't say a word though. My god it's not my fault he got kicked in the you know whats you can't just sneak up on someone like that. Especially me. 

"Uhm are you okay." I say super quietly.

"Yes i'm fine..." He says struggling to get up. Yeah you can tell he was lying. 

"You have fast reflexes if I knew you were gonna do that I probably would have just left your hall pass where it was." He says half laughing kinda crying.

"Yeah sorry....you kind of freaked me out." I say looking down. 

"Sorry about that." He says with a shy smile. Wow he's so cute. In the (I wanna squish you and hug you kind of way and the wow he's hot kind of way)

Woah do I have a crush on this guy? I've never actually liked anyone before.

"Here when you crashed into me in the hall you dropped your hall pass and your pen." He says handing it to me. Our hands brush against each others ever so lightly.

"Thanks..." I say super quietly.

"Hey no prob! Next time i'll make sure not to sneak up behind you." He says half laughing.

"Uhm yeah... hey how did you know I was out here?" I say confused.

"I saw you walking in the halls towards the back exit which I found strange. I was curious so I followed you. Not in a creepy way but I wanted yo return your stuff back to you and wanted to to say sorry for running into you in the hall. Why were you running anyways." He says.

"Oh I uhmm... had to use the bathroom." I said embarrassed.

"Oh yeah that's a good reason to run." He says laughing. I smile a little bit. It feels like were standing there akwardly for a long time. But once again as soon as it starts it ends.

"Uhm well I don't wanna intrude on whatever your doing so I guess I'll go." He says smiling.

"Uh yeah................okay." 

"Well see ya around maybe we'll bump into each other in the hallway. Well hopefully not literally."

"Uhm yeah." I say laughing quietly.

"Yeah that would be funny. Anyways see ya around." He says smiling then waving. I watch him jog away.

"Bye...." I whisper.

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