hi ok so very important note about this book

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I am so considering rewriting this entire book, and before you all yell at me, let me tell you my plans:

I want to rewrite it more maturely, and I mean by less wack ass filler chapters/interactions between the characters and less wack ass scenarios the characters get into in these chapters. I just want everything to feel less comical and rom-com-ish,,because I didn't want it to be like that.

I've realized some of the questionable sentences ive written (the whole hisoka breathing voicemail, the club chapter, and the stripper thing) and I find it very unepic gamer, very uncool and cringy..so I'm scrapping that shit and I'll be replacing that with more sensible and actually good interactions.....in the rewrite

I will not really be rewriting the last two chapters of the book, nor will I be deleting this book entirely. I actually thought that the last two chapters had a pretty good plot and it seemed like it was just getting started so I wanted to still continue that in the rewrite.

Yes. The rewrite is still going to be about a bookkeeper reader with a pretty questionable and dark side to her,,and then in comes the adultrio to unravel that past of hers and perhaps,,fall in love over time 👁👁 (pacing will also be fixed in the rewrite because of the 2 year timeskip i just shoved in this story because I felt lazy. ALSO WILL BE ADDING ONE LITTLE YET VERY IMPORTANT DETAIL TO THE PLOT BUT HUSH HUSH I DONT WANNA SPOIL THE PLOT).

I will also be making the reader's style choices more vague and ambigious for you guys to identify yourselves with,,but I wont be changing the reader's nen and nen abilities because i worked really hard on that one ;; still going to be a fem reader though, deepest apologies to my guys and nonbinary gamers .

Reader's personality will be kinda vague,,but i dont want her to be too bland and generic so I'll sprinkle in some of my personal preferences for a reader's personality 👁👁 if you dont mind..

In the rewrite I will also include more Chrollo x reader and Illumi x reader interactions,,,since in this book I have this strong bias towards Hisoka 👁👁 and I think that's very obvious. I'll even be writing them more in-character as this book makes them a bit too ooc and way mote self-indulgent.

So now,,,i am asking you guys if you're okay with me doing this and that you trust me in this..if yes,,great! I'll start working on the first few chapters and this book will be discontinued. If no,,then I'll try my best to continue the story from the last chapter!

Please please please comment down below your opinions, they are very much appreciated and noted. I'm the absolute worst when it comes to updating times but hey :) hope you still have faith in this story..

Bye :))

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