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Title: The Ties That Bind

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Title: The Ties That Bind

Author: MiniMoxx

Score: 56 out of 60

Book cover- 9 points 

Description- 10 points 

Grammar/spelling- 9 points 

Plot/originality- 10 points 

Pacing- 9 points 

Character development- 9 points 

Judge feedback- The description is so good and hooked me. I love the concept/plot of the story (the arranged marriage and being in love with someone else) and how the chapters switch between the past and present like 2 stories. The figurative language used is also really good. I think there should be a little more action rather than talking to mix it up a bit.

 I think there should be a little more action rather than talking to mix it up a bit

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Title: Venus and Mars

Author: krovogon

Score: 56 out of 60

Book cover- 9 points 

 Description- 9 points 

 Grammar/spelling- 8 points 

Plot/originality- 10 points 

Pacing- 10 points 

Character development- 10 points 

Judge feedback- The story was engaging from the very start. I liked the plot twist; I didn't see it coming. I was intrigued to keep reading. There are some tense inconsistencies and grammar mistakes.

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