Candor or Dauntless?

Part Eight

I DECIDED TO CHANGE THE PLOT AT THE END SINCE IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE AND JUST SUCKS, SORRY AGAIN BOUT IT, IM NOT THE BEST WRITER XD BUT YEAH ENJOY

Tris's POV~~~

"Umm, again, why did they send you in here?" I ask, wondering why they would do this to me. "They just said to stay in here til they call us back out, so we might be in here for awhile knowing them." He replies while sitting down next to me. "So Four, How ya been?" I say trying to start a conversation before this got too boring. "Umm, pretty good, you?" he replies staring at me. "Yeah, I've been o-" I get cut off by Four kissing me. WAIT FOUR'S KISSING ME!

He pulls back before I could do anything. "Wow, um sorry?" He says totally not sorry. "I dont know what came over me." This is awkward. Why would he kiss ME? Wait, does he like like me? Wait, does Uriah like like me too? Probably not, he's always flirting with Marlene.

"COME ON GUYS TIME'S UP." Uriah yells from the other room. We both get up and Four holds the door open for me. As soon as we enter, everyone starts to laugh. "Whats so funny?" Four says, reading my mind.

"No-o-thin-g," Chris manages to get out. As soon as we sit down, everyone stops laughing. "Ok so Tris, its your turn," Will says, winking at me. I glance around, looking at all my friends. I stop at Uriah, who seems in deep thought. I swear he looked mad when we came in.

"Umm, Uriah Candor or Dauntless?" I ask. No reply. "URIAH, CANDOR OR DAUNTLESS?!" I scream while smacking him in the back of his head. "Oh sorry, Candor." Everyone, and  I mean everyone, well except Lauren cause she's a bad word, gasped at what he said. "THE ALMIGHTY URIAH PICKS CANDOR!?" Zeke read my mind. "What? Oh hey guys, what are you doing?" Everyone just stares at Uriah with shock.

Uriah's POV (15 minutes earlier)~~~~~~

Why can't I stop thinking about the kiss? And what Tris said really hurt, does she really think it was in the heat of the moment? Could it have been? What am I even saying, I like Marlene, right?

I glance over at Tris. I see her mouth moving.

"URIAH, CANDOR OR DAUNTLESS?!" She screams while smacking me in the back of my head. I say, "Oh sorry, Candor." as I rub the back of my head. God she can smack. It really hurts. "THE ALMIGHTY URIAH PICKS CANDOR!?" "What? Oh hey guys, what are you doing?" I say, remembering they were here. Everyone's eyes go wide. What did I say? Oh wait the game! The party! Oh Yeahhhhhh....

"Guys? Guys? Hellloooo? Trissy-poo? MarMar? Zekey? Chrissy-poo?" I say using their nicknames, that I  know they hate. No reply. Well this is just awkward...

SO WAHTCHA THINK? DID HE JUST WHAT? WHAT DO YOU THINK WRONGS WITH URIAH? WHY CANT HE FORGET ABOUT THE KISS? WAS IT IN THE HEAT OF THE MOMENT? WILL WE EVER KNOW? WILL MY BROTHER EVER GIVE ME BACK MY POP-TART? THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW.

HEHE SORRY, BUT YEAH...IS THIS OK? I DONT KNOW, IM NOT MUCH OF A WRITER TBH BUT I READ A LOT OF FAN FICS AND ALWAYS SEE MISTAKES OR TERRIBLE PLOTS (NO OFFENSE ;)) AND SAY "UGHH MISTAKE" IM A GRAMMER FREAK XD HEHE, OR I SAY, "WOW WHAT KIND OF PLOT IS THAT? THATS WORSE THAN INSURGENT WHERE TRIS---------BLANK....NOT SPOILING IT FOR PEOPLE WHO HAVENT READ THAT ONE YET.....BUT YEAH SORRY ITS SO LONG AND YEHA..BUT I MIGHT OR MIGHT NOT UPDATE FOR A WHILE CAUSE IM BRAIN DEAD RIGHT NOW..I DONT KNOW IF I WANNA CONTINUE THIS STORY...I MESSED UP THE PLOT ON THIS CHAPTER, BUT I MIGHT FIX IT USING MY AWESOME POWERS....BUT YEAH TELL  ME IF THIS PLOTS OK..

                                                ~NERD4LIFE