Chapter 11

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Welcome back to the immortal soldier, its been a while but we are getting back into the story, after releasing a new chapter for my Strange World book, I thought it would be a good idea to get back into this story; I'm going to try and keep track of what I do in this chapter so I don't fuck up again and leave plot holes or accidentally retcon a plot point (*cough* winter *cough*)

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Raven and Vernal walk into the room of Winter Schnee; Its a total mess, and on the bed lays Winter. She's a mess as she tosses and turns, trying to sit up to see who walked into her room

Winter: Weiss ? is that you

she squeaks out as she doesn't have the strength to raise her head, having failed in sitting up in her messy bed

Raven: not quite miss Schnee

Winter tenses up as- with what little strength she has- she rapidly sits up in bed to stare Raven and Vernal in the eyes

Winter: Who are you ?!

Raven: Oya Oya ? (japanese "my my" or "oh ? whats this ?" a lot of animes (ex. diablo from Tensura slime) have it so I decided to have Raven use catch lines like this) a moment ago you had little to no energy, now you are able to sit up so fast like this ? what gives ?

Winter is about to reach for her sword but is stopped by Vernal, who used a sort of shadow step ability to reach Weiss without her noticing

Vernal:  I think you are going to want to hear us out on this. It involves the illness that has been plaguing you these past days

Winter: who are you ?

Raven: oh you already know our names, you just refuse to believe its us

Weiss: Raven Brawnwen and Vernal (not sure what her last name is)..... What happened to you ?

Vernal: our new boss set us free, this is the result of that freedom

she flexes her hand which makes her fingers blacken and elongate (like lust from FMA) into sharp claws

Winter: W-what do you want ?

Raven: why fight the powers growing in you ?

Winter: so that's what this is about

Vernal: just let go and be set free, you will serve a greater purpose and help lead this world into peace it has never known

Winter: you mean help that maniac rule this world ?!

Raven: tsk..... our master has lived for centuries, has seen so much and only wishes for the world to be in peace, no more famine, no more war..... perfectly balanced.... as all things should be

Vernal: he does what he does to only achieve his end goal

Winter: I think you mistake your messiah to be some sort of saint, not to long ago you "master" wasn't achieving peace, he was ta a battle field acting as the grim reaper, taking the lives of everyone there

Raven: oh we know, our master has no secrets, everyone who becomes his personal servant gains every memory he has, we know about everything he has done and everything he has been through

Vernal: what you don't know is common knowledge among us (sus) 

Winter: what do you mean ?

Raven: those other soldiers were all evil, killing each other, taking the lives of near by innocence and willing to even use children as pawns for their games. Our mast ridded the world of such evil

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