La Llorona's Revenge

Chapter Eleven

Did you really expect La Llorona to leave them alone for a night? She has friends who could do some of the haunting while she is with Lincoln and Lily. I also don't own the pictures used.

It was a quiet night at the Loud House and everyone was doing there own thing. Unaware that they were being watched by a nun who looked at them with disgust. Her name...Valak. She was a nun who haunted multiple areas and caused lots of grief and suffering towards her victims. So it wasn't surprising that she would meet La Llorona and become friends with her. 

So this is the family who caused La Llorona's new son lots of suffering? 

Valak knew what happened to Lincoln through the message that she received from her friend. She was honestly happy that she managed to get her child back and even gain a new family. However...she was disgusted by the actions taken by them. 

Sigh...Hopefully they will learn something from this.

Valak said as she possessed a random doll and sat down quickly before a certain brunette girl came into the room. As she did, Valak observed how her hair was pulled into a pony tail and that she had braces on her teeth. (It's Luan)

"I wonder where Lincoln and Lily went Mr. Coconuts." Luan said. 

Somewhere far away from you.

When she said that, the girl jumped and stared in shock that her dummy actually spoke to her.

"I don't know what you..." the girl tried to say before she heard the door lock behind her.

You let your brother outside just for being bad luck

"He would've ruined our routine. You know that." Luan argued back.

Excuses. EXCUSES! YOU'LL BURN FOR WHAT YOU'VE DONE TOWARDS YOUR LITTLE BROTHER!

Luan tried to exit the room, but couldn't undo the lock. As she did so, she never noticed that her beloved dummy jumped off the chair and started to walk towards her.

"Come on...let me out." Luan said before she was brought down to her knees. Luan looked at her dummy with fear as he started to scowl at her.

Where do you think you're going?

"Mr. Coconuts. Please don't..." Luan said before she felt something scratch her cheek. She felt afraid and wanted to scream only to find that she couldn't.

Come on Luan. Let's play

At the same time, Lincoln was getting in line for a rollercoaster after his mother took his sister for some snacks when he felt someone touch his shoulder. He turned around and saw a beautiful girl with white hair and green eyes.

"I'm sorry to startle you, but do you want to ride this coster together?" The girl said. 

"Sure. I'm Lincoln." Lincoln said before the girl giggled and said:

"I'm Daniella. I haven't seen you around before." Daniella said.

"I just became a ghost a couple of days ago. My mother said that I will meet other ghosts, but she never said that I'll meet someone as beautiful as yourself." Lincoln said which caused Daniella to blush.

"You're such a charmer. I bet you had lots of girls interested in you when you were alive." Daniella said.

"Please..Most girls weren't interested in me. And even if they were...my ex sisters scared them off." Lincoln said. Daniella was about to ask more questions before they were called to enter the next available seat. Unaware that La Llorona was watching the scene and was smiling. 

This was just the distraction that Lincoln needed to get his mind off of his former family. Meanwhile, Luna was heading up the stairs to her room when she opened the door and came face to face with a passed out Luan with hundreds of bruises and cuts on her body. As she ran out to inform the others, Valak watched on with a smirk knowing that this will be the least of their problems once La Llorona got back from bonding with her newest children.

Hope you enjoyed the chapter...Bye 👋