The Coming Storm

The Coming Storm Chapter 8

Firestar- CloudClan Leader- Orange tabby tom with green eyes

Brightsong- Mother of Ravenstorm- Jet black she-cat with yellow eyes and scars on her shoulders

Frostfang- White tom cat with pale blue eyes-

Hollowpelt- Grey tabby she-cat with pale green eyes -

Ravenstorm- Black she-cat with a white scruff, white paws (forgot the eye color. her eyes are yellow btw)

Venomstrike- CloudClan Deputy -Father of Ravenpaw- Brown tabby tom with orange eyes

Pearlcloud- White she-cat cat with black splotches- Medicine cat

Silvermist- silver tom-cat- has no parents

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Flamewing- Former CloudClan Leader- red tom with green eyes

Leopardflight- Pearlcloud's mother. White cat with a pink paw and yellow splotches- has pale blue eyes

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Tigerstar- brown tabby tom with amber eyes-ThornClan leader

Blackfoot- ThornClan deputy-jet black tom cat (Dead)

Ashblaze- Grey tom cat with jet black paws and copper eyes

Oakcrest- A brown tabby tom with yellow eyes and a scar on his left eye

Creamheart- A light tan she-cat tabby with pale blue eyes

(for now there are no other cats or clans)

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Ravenstorm found herself in StarClan again. But she wasn't alone.. She was with her mate, Silvermist. "Silvermist? What are we doing here?" Ravenstorm asked curiously. "Pearlcloud told me about this. Some cat is supposed to come and give you the mark of immortality." Silvermist replied. "Then what are you doing here?" Ravenstorm asked questionably. "I'm here to give you the mark" Silvermist said gently. A red blur appeared. The red blur became a cat-like shape as it padded closer. "Flamewing!!" Ravenstorm squealed with excitement as if she were a kit again. "You know this cat?" Silverwing asked. "Yeah!! He was the one who told me I had powers and that we would be together.." Ravenstorm blushed at the memory. "Ravenstorm, Silvermist, I have called you here for you Ravenstorm, to earn your mark and for you Silvermist, to earn a new mark. Ravenstorm, you may not notice but you are pregnant." Flamewing said in a deep voice. "Well.. I have been experiencing some loss in appetite for some reason..." Ravenstorm said remembering yesterday morning. "What? Why didn't you tell me Ravenstorm?" Silvermist asked questionably. "I didn't know! I just thought it was something else.." Ravenstorm replied guiltily. "As you can see your belly is swelling a little faster than expected." Flamewing said. "Anyways.." Flamewing said changing the topic. "the real reason I called you two here is because you need to earn your marks." Flamewing said nearly growling. Flamewing held up one paw and closed his eyes.  A bright light came from Flamewing's paw blinding Ravenstorm and Silvermist. Ravenstorm and Silvermist shut their eyes as hard as they could. "It is done." Flamewing called. Ravenstorm saw another mark. Not on her forehead but on her chest. The star of immortality. "Now it is time for you two to go back to your world. Some cat is in danger." Flamewing said in a deep growl. As Ravenstorm and Silvermist had returned there was a yowl of pain near the edge of the forest. As Ravenstorm got closer, she could smell a familiar scent. It was Brightsong!! "Come on Silvermist we have to hurry!!!" Ravenstorm yowled. "Who is the cat that is in danger?" Silvermist asked still running toward the forest. " Its my mother!! I have to help her!!" Ravenstorm yowled almost crying. It was badgers.  Brightsong was surrounded by 6 badgers. One of the badgers bit Brightsong's back while the other bit her neck. Brightsong tried to fend them off but blood gushed from a gash in her shoulder as Brightsong collapsed and lay motionless. The badgers started sniffing Brightsong's dead body. "GET AWAY FROM MY MOTHER!!" Ravenstorm yowled as she flipped over a badger and scratched its belly. Its blood spattered on Ravenstorm's claws as the badger was thrown across the clearing and into the river. The badgers growled and hissed in anger. A badger was on a rock, ready to jump on Ravenstorm. "Ravenstorm!! Watch out!!" Silvermist yowled as he ran up and pushed Ravenstorm out of the way just before he pounced. "SIlvermist!!!!" Ravenstorm yowled in pain as badger claws scratched her fur. Ravenstorm healed Silvermist but she collapsed on the ground. The badgers put their attention to another cat. Who was this Brown warrior? It was Venomstrike! "D-Dad.." Ravenstorm yowled as loud as she could. "Ravenstorm!" Venomstrike yowled as he turned his attention to his daughter. Little did he know this was the badger's chance to attack. 3 badgers pounced on Venomstrike weighing him down while the other 2 bit his neck and scratched his belly ripping his pelt off."No!!" Ravenstorm yowled as she struggled to get up. Ravenstorm was surged with new power. The power of Flamewing and all of her warrior ancestors on her side. Ravenstorm bit 2 badgers on their throat and threw them across the forest and into the gorge. Ravenstorm's tail lashed as she chased the other badgers claws sheathed and her yellow eyes filled with anger. The badgers tried to run away but Ravenstorm caught them. She scratched their sides and faces until they bled to death. Ravenstorm heard a faint voice in her head that sounded like Flamewing's voice. "You have done well, Ravenstorm. You have made your ancestors proud and now you will return to camp.." The voice said as Ravenstorm ran to camp. Her blood was spattering every step that she took but she wasn't weak. She ran into Firestar's den and told him the news. "Flamewing told me that a cat was in danger and it was my mother, Brightsong. Then my dad came to rescue her but he didn't make it in time. They're both dead Firestar!!" Ravenstorm yowled as her eyes filled up with tears.  "You know Flamewing right? He- He is my father." Firestar mewed gently. "I know what it feels like to lose both parents too- because my mom- she gave birth to me but something went wrong. She lost too much blood and- My dad was a Clan cat and My mom was a kittypet. I was soon raised by my dad in the forest until he died and I became the next leader. Its going to be alright Ravenstorm..." Firestar mewed as he padded closer to Ravenstorm with a gentle glint in his green eyes. "Silvermist will help you and so will I. He's your mate right?" Firestar asked questionably. "Y-yeah he doesn't have any parents either." Ravenstorm mewed trying to stop crying. " Silvermist, You, and I have no parents. We can all get through this together." Firestar mewed in a motivating tone. "Thanks Firestar, that really helped." Ravenstorm purred. "We will all go on a hunt tomorrow. I'll show you both a special place where I go to clear my thoughts." Firestar said in a happy tone.

What will happen next? Where is this special place? Will Firestar tell Ravenstorm and Silvermist a secret to his backstory? 

Find out on The Coming Storm Chapter 9

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this story was the longest out of all my stories 1182 words. not bad huh?