The Coming Storm Chapter 9

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Firestar- CloudClan Leader- Orange tabby tom with green eyes

Brightsong- Mother of Ravenstorm- Jet black she-cat with yellow eyes and scars on her shoulders (Dead :(      )

Frostfang- White tom cat with pale blue eyes-

Hollowpelt- Grey tabby she-cat with pale green eyes -

Ravenstorm- Black she-cat with a white scruff, white paws (forgot the eye color. her eyes are yellow btw)

Venomstrike- CloudClan Deputy -Father of Ravenpaw- Brown tabby tom with orange eyes (Dead)

Pearlcloud- White she-cat cat with black splotches- Medicine cat

Silvermist- silver tom-cat- has no parents

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Flamewing- Former CloudClan Leader- red tom with green eyes

Leopardflight- Pearlcloud's mother. White cat with a pink paw and yellow splotches- has pale blue eyes

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Tigerstar- brown tabby tom with amber eyes-ThornClan leader

Blackfoot- ThornClan deputy-jet black tom cat (Dead)

Ashblaze- Grey tom cat with jet black paws and copper eyes

Oakcrest- A brown tabby tom with yellow eyes and a scar on his left eye

Creamheart- A light tan she-cat tabby with pale blue eyes

(for now there are no other cats or clans)

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As Ravenstorm and Silvermist left Firestar's den, they secretly went to the bush where Oakcrest was. "Psst! Oakcrest!" Ravenstorm whispered. "It's me Ravenstorm, You can come out now.." Ravenstorm whispered a little louder. "I have some-cat with me. She wants to join your clan, and so do I." Oakcrest growled. "Its okay. Please come out I wont hurt you and neither will Silvermist." Ravenstorm mewed gently. "Silvermist? Is he here?" The she-cat mewed.  "Yes I'm here." Silvermist mewed happily. The she-cat peered out of the bush slowly. "Is any other cat here with you?" she asked quietly. "As a matter of fact n-" Ravenstorm started. "As a matter of fact, yes" A low growl interrupted. It was Firestar! "What are these cats doing in CloudClan territory?" Firestar growled unhappily. " Okay Firestar, It was me. I met Oakcrest when I was a kit. He belongs to ThornClan. He has another cat with him because they want to join our clan.. He wants to experience happiness and be loyal to some-cat who trusts him" Ravenstorm mewed taking the blame. "Yeah!" the she-cat mewed. "Excuse me, my name is Creamheart, and I haven't seen Ravenstorm or Silvermist before but from what Oakcrest has told me and what Ravenstorm just did for us, I can tell her personality is loyal.  I know I can trust her." Creamheart mewed gently. "Ravenstorm healed me when I was about to die." Oakcrest growled. "Very well. You have 1 day to prove your loyalty to CloudClan." Firestar growled as he strode away. "Okay, Creamheart and Oakcrest, Lets do this.." Ravenstorm yowled with determination. "Rule #1 Always add to the fresh-kill pile BEFORE eating your kill. The sake of the clan comes first." Silvermist mewed. "Rule #2 Sleep in the designated dens. Since you guys are warriors you get to sleep in the private den next to us because that's where the elders would be." Ravenstorm said. "Rule #3 Once people can trust you, you will be assigned an apprentice which will probably happen soon because I trust you to mentor my coming kits." Ravenstorm mewed. "Rule #4 When some-cat dies you must sit vigil. Last but not least Rule #5 & 6: Clan meetings : You are not to speak unless you are asked to.  Rule #6: do not start any havoc at clan gatherings it breaks the warrior code." Ravenstorm said. "I'll gather some moss, bracken, and some fresh-kill. You stay in the den okay?" Silvermist mewed to Oakcrest and Creamheart as he padded away. Ravenstorm was about to follow Silvermist until she randomly collapsed on the ground. "Silvermist!!! The kits are coming!!!" Ravenstorm yowled.


What will happen next? Will the kits live?  What should the kit's names be? 

Comments are accepted for kit names in clean language please

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