The Dissonant Notes Of Fate

Six

A/N: Hello. So I recently unpublished this chapter because of a slight problem. But it's fixed now. Please tell me what you think about the chapter now. Just a heads up, I will be going on a 6 month hiatus when December ends. Also, initially, I was supposed to write a new book with ZelotArchon but he had to pull out due to work. Nevertheless, Excidium Troiae has finally been published. Do check it out. Also, a special thanks to dwarvess for reading and editing all my mistakes in all our chapters. As usual, don't forget to vote, comment, review and leave a kudos.

I'm going to start by replying to the reviews (which caused me to rewrite this chapter) from some of my readers on fanfiction.net.

Adamcoyne:

I do like the story so far it's very good. One thing I will say though is why did Perseus seem afraid of Atlás? He didn't seem to stick up for himself at all. Surely a Titan that almost defeated the entire Olympian council is only second to Kronos if even that right?

Also I'm making my guess for the traitors. Aphrodite and Athens.

Reply: Thank you for this review. I'm not going to say anything about the traitors though. Trying to keep up the suspense. For the part about Atlas I do not know what came over me. Again, I apologize for the sloppy writing. Thanks for drawing this to my attention.

Yesse2362:

have actually to plot things that bother me.

First is that you change Zoe's old language from old to new.

And the other problem is that it was said Perseus could defeat all 6 major olympians if he wanted to do he would be stronger than atlas.

Not that much but still that he wouldn't either let himself be put himself by that stupid goddess nor the Titan of strength, they aren't strong enough for that.

Also immortals are cocky.

Percys character aside the gods and Titans are at least confident because they know they are better and stronger than mortals.

Same goes for the monsters, it's obvious that they fear the Titans etcétera and wouldn't dare attack them so they attack eg the demigods instead.

Otherwise I enjoyed the chapter but I hope you maybe change a bit like for example the monsters that come after em or something.

Bye

Yesse

Reply: Thanks for also pointing this out to me. I get so confused when writing in 'thou' and 'thee' format. I'm going to correct that in this new rendition of this chapter. Also, I am going to try to edit the part about Atlas and try to make Perseus have that confidence other immortals have.

Six Foot Assassin:

This Percy almost killed the Olympians? He seems completely useless, weak and afraid of everything. You have no idea what you are doing.

Reply: This one hit hard. It's what caused me to write this chapter once again. Yes, I do not know what I am doing. I just write it as I go. There is no excuse for my sloppy and messed up work and I am going to try to make this chapter clearer and less confusing. Thank you for your review and I hope you stay for more chapters.

Anyway, enjoy the story!

LUKE tried to hold back his breakfast as Zoë drove. The son of Hermes groaned as the lieutenant of Artemis took a sharp curve. She was driving past the speed limit and Luke was surprised they hadn't been pulled up yet.

"Can we stop?" Thalia said what they had all been thinking.

"No," Zoe replied without taking her eyes off the road.