HUMOUR/CHICKLIT RESULTS

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1. Reborn
By GoddessOfLaziness

Total score: 75/100

There was no title on the cover, and no author name present to capture my interest. The blurb turned my opinion into a different light. All characters well were established, and the plot and the tenses and emotions are all in the right place. The grammar was slotted into the same paragraph/line it got confusing who was talking.

2. A Trip To A Gloomy Christmas
By FURASA

Total score: 90/100

As the title states: A Gloomy Christmas. It fitted well with the plot. I've never read a character who has a severe case of bad luck. One after another followed, it was pretty laughable and realistic. However, I felt the MC was a bit over the top and self-righteous, but saying that it all went together with her anger management.

3. Whirlwind
By softyhartz

Total score: 92/100

I enjoyed the story. The author created two leading characters. I was impressed by the grammar and punctuation- they were flawlessly in place and no errors. However, if there were more background information and not jumping weeks ahead in the plot, the stories flow would make a more pleasurable read. 

4. Sistahs Forever
By PriscillaYiadom4

Total score: 75/100

I feel as if I had a more enjoyable experience if the author did a full edit and added the correct punctuations. There was no detail or descriptive writing to help paint the scenes. The dialogue was the prominent source of writing. 

5. You Don't Know Me
By Avindigrace

Total score: 68/100

I did try to get into this story, but I felt there was no plot development within the first five chapters. Along with that, the punctuations were not all great. For example, all sentences/dialogue must start with a capital. With a full edit and detailed/descriptive scenes, the story would have a better outcome.

6. Secrets Kill
By DarielClaire

Total score: 80/100

Overall the story had an intriguing plotline and exciting characters. I absolutely love the cover and banners they are elegant and eye-catching. Your grammar is spot on, but your dialogue between different characters are in the same paragraph/or on the same line. Some advice: when a new/other person speaks add it onto the next line.

7. Perfectly Unexpected
By MiniMoxx

Total score: 100/100

I was hooked from chapter one. I found the main characters intriguing. I was impressed by how the writer portrayed an amnesia personality. It's not easy writing based on no background, but they pulled it off, and I was excited to read further. Each new chapter captivated me, fed to right emotions, and I needed to know what happened next.

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