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The crazy B's

The members are in the photo above minus Jeffree, I'm over that phase of my life and you should too!

The crazy B's

The Crazy B's



Where they live:
Ren- Hawaii
Nie- Canada
Bey- Houston, Texas
Jay- San Diego, California
Mac- Los Angeles, California
Zoe- Atlanta, Georgia
Bil- Los Angeles, California
Kas- Lethbridge, Alberta, Canada
Daz- Hastings, East Sussex, England
Ann- Austin, Texas
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Los Angeles, California

Jeffree invited you to a party in Los Angeles, he invited the rest of his friends as well. He's been planning this for a while and he's totally thrilled of seeing all of you guys together again. But the 12 of you aren't the only ones he invited, other youtubers were invited. You took a look at the clock, 4:33, you still have an hour but you decided to get ready early. You made your way to the bathroom and took a shower.
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You go to your closet with a towel wrapped around your body, you search for a dress. You soon then realized all your dresses were skintight, all of it were revealing and you don't like the thought of that, you soon found an unfamiliar nude dress. You took it out and just decided to wear that, it wasn't the most revealing you had anyway

You step out the closet and head to your room to do your make up and hair



You wore glasses today, it's been a while since you've taken your contacts off. You exit the room and head towards the shoe rack, you pick up a pair of heels. You look up to see, Allen? Your eyes widen, your hands go immediately go to cover your exposed cleavage, "Why are you here?", you asked, "You've worn glasses today", "Answer me, what are you doing here? Last time I checked you were still in Korea", you noticed he was wearing a tuxedo, he doesn't usually wear that to the court. Does he have a case here in L.A., but then he doesn't need to come by at your house, "I'm here to give you a lift", he answered, you looked away and continued to wear the heels with one hand, the other still covering your cleavage.

You finished wearing the heels and entered your room again, Allen stood there waiting for you. You exit the room wearing a blazer over your dress and Allen was evidently disappointed with this, "You know, you don't have to wear that, it ruins the whole 'sexy' look you're going for"

You walked towards the table and grabbed your purse, you look up to his gaze and smirk knowing he wants to see you without it. He looked away and cleared his throat, "Let's just go", he said as he turned around and walked out the house to the car, you followed him. You get in the car beside him, you put your purse on your thighs, he turns his head to you, "Are we all set?", he said and you nodded, "Didn't forget anything?", he added, you go through all the stuff you need in your head, "Phone, my phone", you said and immediately exited the car to get it

Allen patiently waited for you in the car turning on the radio as he does
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This is one of my better ones. Better concept and writing and all that stuff. It's about the group being supernatural and fighting against them, their party was crashed and they fought against them. I wrote this on my notebooks and all that stuff all for it to be discontinued. It took so much effort to think of distinct powers for each individual character and if I'm being honest, this would not go anywhere or at least if I thought of continuing it now. I forgot all of my plans for this.

My thoughts
The concept is fine altogether but what defines a story is not the concept but how the author takes advantage of that so basically good concept + good storyline is an award winning book. For this though... not really. I could do better...

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