This story is one of my first stories i done in 6th grade and it probably wont get finished.. its more of a play full story.
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this story, well. the main char. starts off dreaming thats all this chapter is about. sorry if its confusing
chapter 1
its getting cold but the flames are still going, oh.....no its goign out. im confused why is it cold when there is flames........help me understand. a person comes up to sydney wearing nothing but black is it a she or a he? thought sydney, the person spoke,......but i couldnt hear the peson. i ask "wat"? the person turns around. i run and see who it is then the hood comes down it is........... i scream, why do tou look like me every word i heard. "w-w-who are you " she replyed with im you, your darkness. if you keep doing this "NO!!!" your hurting ppl who care abou t you, you'll end up like this, she terns in a curcler motion. lip,uper ear,noise,peirced there was blood on her face like she had killed someone, she had scare going over her eye like someone cut her over the eye, and she had a set of daggers under her nice leather coat. they had blood dripping from them and she had black hair that went to the middle of her back. her hair was silky till u got to the bottem were it was gross liek someone had stuck it in hairsprary. but when u let go of her hair after touching it ur hand would be all bloody. i dont want to look like that no affence, none taken but you should try to be nice to others not just the people you hang out with, ....i will try much harder to not be so mean to ppl. sydney hears some ringing noises. "whats your name. sydney asked the darkness said "its............" ba-dump ba-dump ba-dump
END OF CHAPER 1