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🍿📍𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖐 𝕮𝖔𝖛𝖊𝖗 💜(3/5)
The book cover doesn't really do much for what the story is about. The story isn't about Jungkook alone but about a love triangle, judging from what the description provided. It would have been better if it was harbouring the aesthetics of the girl, Jungkook and the self-centered man
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(5/5)The tittle is matching with the theme and the setting of the book. It's provided okay. I Need You, it sounds love sickened, domineering, trampled upon and brutal.
Though, there are tons of wattpad book that might harbour the same title. Next time, you should write down the things that your book portrays and give it a title that fits it.
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🍿📍𝕯𝖊𝖘𝖈𝖗𝖎𝖕𝖙𝖎𝖔𝖓 💜
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(6/10)The description gives a little too much information away. And it correlate with how the main character narrates her mind. It's basically a spoiler in my opinion. It gave an open mind to what is to come or what is to be seen thus further.
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