Feedbackplz Stories

I don't really know what this is I'm just gonna tell you that...... I just want feedback for what I have so please tell me what doesn't make sense what doesn't work and...

This is a fantasy medieval story. A boy is running but from what? He's scared and confused and can't seem to think straight.

Something I wrote for my English class that I'm actually pretty proud of:) I was in AP Lang last year and It was actually kind of weird just writing a simple fiction sho...

A young woman pursuing an extra credit assignment leads her to an ambitious interview with a serial killer on death row. She learns early on that not everything she has...

Me: hello to who ever poor soul reading this for one sorry for my lack for the two story's anyway do you and good bye

hi I'm Lindsay and I'm kinda making this to vent and get some feedback on a few things I'm doing it as a type of therapy bc I need it but am in a kinda hard situation

Well I love stw and this is a strong of a force sensitive boy my charecter finding a grey Jedi temple and learning there ways on his own. The time line is in the middle...

This is a short story i made for school, it's not of great quality but i would be very happy for any useful feedback or ideas. It is about a mother trying to figure out...