Feedbackplz Stories

hi I'm Lindsay and I'm kinda making this to vent and get some feedback on a few things I'm doing it as a type of therapy bc I need it but am in a kinda hard situation

This is a fantasy medieval story. A boy is running but from what? He's scared and confused and can't seem to think straight.

Me: hello to who ever poor soul reading this for one sorry for my lack for the two story's anyway do you and good bye

Something I wrote for my English class that I'm actually pretty proud of:) I was in AP Lang last year and It was actually kind of weird just writing a simple fiction sho...

A young woman pursuing an extra credit assignment leads her to an ambitious interview with a serial killer on death row. She learns early on that not everything she has...

I don't really know what this is I'm just gonna tell you that...... I just want feedback for what I have so please tell me what doesn't make sense what doesn't work and...

Well I love stw and this is a strong of a force sensitive boy my charecter finding a grey Jedi temple and learning there ways on his own. The time line is in the middle...