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Orochi Tempest is a typical worker drone, wake up, snack, work, drink, work, dinner, work and sleep. But when his life takes a sudden turn when he falls asleep and wakes...

Damien Cherry was the 'bad boy' of his high school, Lofter High. He got into fights and had a shitty attendance, many plus himself, were surprised he hadn't been expelle...

A short 3 some sex story Must read

Reyansh Raghuvanshi is a Famous Young Bachelor.....Sees Sara Mourya by chance in a Party And Got Interested in her... he who is a manipulator, Dominating and Lil bit Ps...

In the city of Lindoria, a group of college friends' lives take an extraordinary turn when they discover they possess superhuman abilities. As they navigate the complexi...

hi! this is my first time publishing my work and this is just what i have of the storyline and i would love to hear your ideas and feedback i know its not that good but...

Percy is flunking and living his best life. Annabeth is acing everything except for the annoying 'working with other people' part. What happens when these two opposites...

Join DJ in his journey to discover what he is throughout the omniverse with his friends by his side by using the disc's

This story is about a teenager who stays to herself and looks at life with a different point of view.... Well in her mind at least! She's a young women trying to find he...

A princess on a mission to kill her father. A guard who will forever follow the princess. A Queen who will never be a mother.

We are writing a personal narrative for ELA .This is not a real story I'm just saying it is because I need a good grade lol. Pls give me feedback so I can get a kinda g...

Alphonse who goes by Al is a 15 year old boy that transfers schools halfway through the year. Follow the story to see how he blends in with everyone else [Im doing this...

The main character is wandering around in the woods to find a old man guarding a cave warning the kid saying not to enter. The kid ignores the old man and goes in anyway...

A girl named Hana (Me) shared stories in her middle school experience. (Things get complicated) With the help of her friends Ariana, Eliana, and Mia.

Honestly, I just want to write poems of my wildly fantastical people and creatures in my head

a bond that broke from a feeling that has been forgotten

This is a true story on what's happening to me of someone who likes me. The thing is I'm not sure who it is.

Lucy heartfilia is a celestial mage,Natsu dragneel is a dragon slayer. They were the best of friends,but what happens when one person breaks them apart and turns them in...

A easy reader story based on modern situations blown out of proportion. A good mind thinking historical fiction that still needs to be finished. Check it out and tell me...

All i can say about this story is that...you'll have to read it to find out, at least give it a try and give feed back!! so i know what to do to make it better this sto...