Narutomask Stories

I have seen many naruto fanfics that start out good or have things I like in them but as the story progresses they start making less sense. so tell me when I'm making mistakes. (also updates won't be regular. I don't have wifi so it is difficult to make consistent updates) some of the pictures might be hand drawn so don't judge how bad they are

What if Naruto had know what was inside him, but he chose to hide it. What if he was deadlast but wanted to fake it? What if everything we thought we knew was just a mask? What if someone had been there for him? This story is adopted from -ticci-work- check 'em out and follow as well. Link to original story right here. https://my.w.tt/0ty9U4pPTR

The village has always hated Naruto because of the nine tail attack on the village all those years ago but this was not Naruto fault he is the host of the nine tail he is not the nine tails itself but this made Naruto hate the villagers even more but was still because of the village and he wears a mask so no one knows his true pain what he his hiding its not like no one will care but what if one day the mask start to fall so everyone can see how much pain Naruto is in (Naruto parents Minato and kushina are alive in this story and Naruto also has a little brother called Minako Uzumaki in this story and he get more attention from there parents then Naruto does)

When 13 year old Naruto Uzumaki wakes up in the land of the whirlpools, he is surprised to find a beautiful blue woman talking to him, and he is also surprised about the new scenery. how will he adapt to this new life?

One might question how a 12 year old jinchuriki obtains the power over death, becomes stronger than an S-class shinobi, and gain a harem while he's at it. Well, he doesn't. Look, you don't question life. What you can do though is gain the pity of the death god and end up receiving powers beyond mortal understanding. It just happens. So now he's technically the strongest shinobi in all the elemental nations? So maybe he has to die from time to time while doing so, but he plans his own funerals, and he prefers them being filled with the blood and tears of his enemies. [WARNINGS] Naruto does not belong to me, this is an idea suggested by @juubi-mage0327 , I am not sure if I will be able to do seme Naruto properly but [rolls shoulders] let's try this shall we?

Pain, I always feel pain.No one cares, no one trys. I hold a mask, but soon, it will fall and shatter like the rest of me. I hide myself from everyone cause then no trouble will come but soon I will get tired of stretching my face and laughing, soon I will become dull. I pretend to care and cry for people who never mattered but soon, I will stop and become black. I pretend to be weak and love, but soon, all of that will fall. But maybe it will stay...

⚠️SLOW UPDATE/ON HIATUS⚠️ What if Naruto is actually smart but pretends to be stupid? What if Naruto has been an anbu since he was 5 years old? What if Naruto's heart became soft and caused him to fall into depression? Let's see what would happen if all those things came true. The cover of the book has been edited by me. Naruto doesn't belong to me, it's belong to Masashi Kishimoto. I just changed the storyline of it. (This book is not about yaoi or romance, it's just about the friendship between Naruto and his friends（„• ֊ •„)♡ The chapters at the beginning may be a bit boring, but please read until the last chapter has been published🙇🏻‍♀️)