Scrpit Stories

Remember my play "This Turned Out Pretty Alright"? Well here it is! It's been revised and edited but it's still not done, i would really like some feedback. Plz?

DISCLAIMER: This is a demo script for a game Astro.Com-et and Ozzie are working on. Astro.Com-et wrote the script and Ozzie is posting it for her. Description: A murder of crow's fancy perching on top of anything. Trees, rocks, humans. These crows are not like the others. Read the psychologically horrifying story of Mike as he overcomes his fears of dark places trying to get back his dear friend.

Just some cute little skits I wrote.

for the boy-girl bestfriends.