An Unkindness and Cloud's Departure
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Ongoing7m
Last published Mon, Mar 14, 2022
this short story is a prompt I came across and I was bored so I decided to write my own version.
This short story is in first person, narrated by a determined 16 year old girl named Raven, who's been having struggles in her difficult and confusing relationship with her boyfriend, Elijah. Elijah's bad-tempered attitude slowly begins to rub off on Raven, causing distress to her and to those who know her, as well as her best friends that are affected by her sudden, boorish mood. One evening, Elijah makes a wrongful action, shattering a lot more than just Ravens vow to try and help Elijah with whatever is bringing him pain.
Also, to clear up confusion for the writing, Jerry's pronouns are he/they.
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I'm, of course, open to constructive criticism if you have any :)
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