World of Legends Act 1 (Beta version)

This story that I'm posting is going to be a comic book down the road, but I'm just putting some of the rough draft out to get some eyes on my story!!! It's an Action/Adventure Following a young African American male, dealing with the problems of his mother that is originally not from Earth, being tracked by his mother's people he will be facing the trials and the repercussion of his mother's actions. If I could give it a content rating I would most definitely say R-rated.

Ps: Ps: the way I wrote the story and the way it is formatted is a way as if you're reading a comic book, just without the panels. Hope y'all enjoy.

From: Jalaydon Se'von Hill. you can also follow the Twitter for exclusive updates. @W_O_L2000