SHIROU IN HSR

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Parts 18
Time 2h 12m

Reads 5,618
Votes 220
Parts 18
Time 2h 12m

just a story test.
    do not judge it, instead give me a tips how to improve.
    
    The actual description:
    After shirou being sucked by somes sort of portal,shirou wake up in a futuristic place.
    
    "Hey are you alright?"
    
    That what a pink hair girl said to him
    
    Shirou realize the situation he into and 
    begin opening his mouth.
    
    "Tohsaka going to kill me"All Rights Reserved

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just a story test.
    do not judge it, instead give me a tips how to improve.
    
    The actual description:
    After shirou being sucked by somes sort of portal,shirou wake up in a futuristic place.
    
    "Hey are you alright?"
    
    That what a pink hair girl said to him
    
    Shirou realize the situation he into and 
    begin opening his mouth.
    
    "Tohsaka going to kill me"

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