just a story test.
do not judge it, instead give me a tips how to improve.
The actual description:
After shirou being sucked by somes sort of portal,shirou wake up in a futuristic place.
"Hey are you alright?"
That what a pink hair girl said to him
...
"how come the situation here became such a mess?"Seele ask Natasha
"I heard that First Mining Team found a Geomarrow vein with incredible deposits... The initial estimate put it at the largest discovery in the last thirty years"
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"Are you serious? That's big news. How come I never heard about it? " Seele ask
"Well, they weren't in the hurry to makes it know. Most of the mines have been contaminated by fragmentum -- many people are out of work. They were afraid of being overwhelmed if they let the word out.
But the vagrants here have keen eyes -- they couldn't keep it hidden from them. Some local gangs wanted to profit from the situation, so they blackmail the mining team for hush money... and that was the final straw"
"Well technically that the price of guarding a secret."said Stelle
"*Sigh*. ..I can understand your point of view, it's just that the underground is in difficult straits... . So, are you guys here to help resolve the situation?"
"No, they're here because they need a favor from Chief Oleg. I'm escorting them"said Seele. She begin turn her face towards Shirou and other. "And seeing as you need that helping hand, it wouldn't be too much to ask you to lend one here first, right?"
"Of course we wanna help.... We care about other people too y'know."
"Well why not? It not hurt for one to help other"said Shirou
"Oh ... That's quite nice of you" said Seele
"Haha, I believe we're dealing with kind-hearted people here, Seele"
"As you've all seen, the situation down here is .... Strained. If you can, we really would appreciate you helping the people."
They continue they walk
"That Giant ore vein -- the one they discovered.. that must be where the clashes are centered?, come on let's go to high ground and take a look"said Seele
"Um guys is that person... Is he a sleep?"ask march
"He might need some help, come on let's go and take a look" said Seele
They begin walk toward the guy. The man is sleeping like some kid in weekends.
"Falling asleep in the place like this.. impressive!"said march,
"Wakey wakey, you'll get mushrooms growing on you head"
"March I don't think that the right words to wake up people-
"Huh mushrooms soup?where"said the man after he wake up
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