just a story test.
do not judge it, instead give me a tips how to improve.
The actual description:
After shirou being sucked by somes sort of portal,shirou wake up in a futuristic place.
"Hey are you alright?"
That what a pink hair girl said to him
...
My brain are get little bit dizzy after the warp jump.I get up from the sofa and go straight to the express window to look at the planet that himeko was talking about.
After that my eyes Is met with a white blue-ish planet.The planet is remind me of earth condition in the ice age that I learn in middle school.
"After all those millennia.. is this what jarilo VI has become?"said himeko with surprised tone
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(so the state of the planet never look likes this in the first place huh)
"Huh so this snowy planet is our destination this time?"ask march
"Yes.. look like this trailblazer expedition won't be so easy"
"Spatial readout anomaly!star rail stability is down to 10 percent.
Schedule alterations,7 day stopover extended indefinitely
(I wonder what pom-pom said by the word anomaly)
"Anomaly?" Stelle ask
Himeko start to explain the situation
"The complex of locality of this world has somehow being effected - the star rail has been block off by something"
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Himeko continue "Look try to think it's like a typical train as an example.it like the train railway is suddenly snapped and the way foward leads to collapsing abyss...
"The most logical things to do is to break hard right?"
"If we force our way ahead,there could be a consequence the we might faced"pom-pom added
"Oh no,not this again!"
(Seems like it not the first time something like this happen)
I look at my left and see mr yang Walking towards us.
