Undecided (postponed)

Well, I have never written anything before in my life (other than for school), so here goes nothing!! Please comment and tell me what your thoughts and/or opinions no matter how bad you think the story is. I welcome all the feedback possible!! And I know, I haven't really started the story yet, but I will soon! I am sorry about the title, I will hopefully have an actual title by a few chpaters in.