Rasibell

Just because I make grammar mistakes or write quickly doesn’t mean I rely on AI. Also, I didn’t write this story all in one day—I just don’t always post it right after I finish. In fact, this story sat in my Google Docs for a while before I finally had the courage to share it.
          
          I do include breaks when switching POVs, so if you haven’t noticed that, maybe you haven’t caught up yet.
          
          And honestly, it’s not fair for you to shame me—especially over something like how I write or how often I post. Feedback is helpful, but calling it Al-written when it's not IS discouraging. I’ve seen that you haven’t posted anything yourself, so it’s pretty bold of you to criticize when you’re not even sharing your own work. 
          
          I'm only 15, im not some master writer I try my best with what I write.  I will not have someone who likes incest books be reading my work, your  not welcome on my profile or reading my books. please take BOTH of MY books out of your reading list ^^ 
          

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Hey, I wasn't trying to offend you. You asked for tips, and I gave some - maybe too directly, but not with bad intentions. What bothered me is that instead of asking me to clarify or just ignoring it, you chose to go through my reading list, assume things about me, and judge my taste based on fictional content. That's unfair. 
            
            For the record, just because I read darker stories doesn't mean I support them in real life. I don't appreciate being shamed for liking fiction that's clearly marked as such. I'll respect your request and remove your books from my list. But I also hope you learn the difference between criticism and judgment - what you said was personal, and it didn't need to be. 
            
            I'm done with this conversation. Good luck with your writing.
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