120Iris021

Hey, I am posting chapter 1 of  a new book I have started, called Angel's Sins. I am posting for feedback on the chapter, so please feel free to comment. If feedback is good (or bad, I don't really care), I will post a chapter once every 3 days when I have written 10 chapters. I would love to hear your opinions, so everything kind of criticism is accepted (preferably constructive though). Thanks!

120Iris021

Hey, I am posting chapter 1 of  a new book I have started, called Angel's Sins. I am posting for feedback on the chapter, so please feel free to comment. If feedback is good (or bad, I don't really care), I will post a chapter once every 3 days when I have written 10 chapters. I would love to hear your opinions, so everything kind of criticism is accepted (preferably constructive though). Thanks!

120Iris021

Sorry I haven't update Me in a while. I was going to a new school this year that's an hour away. With the amount of homework I got, I haven't had time to do any writing. I've just been always bust. I'm so sorry for the really long delay, please forgive me. I will start posting a chapter at least twice a week starting this week (School for me ends on the 5th) and after that it should be at least three times a week. Thank all of you!

Nzuppy

I have been reading The Power Within and have highly enjoyed it as well as congratulated your partner, a close friend of mine, on your all's work on the story. I don't mean to be pushy but I was wondering if you knew when you might post the next few parts of it. Again, I don't mean to rush you, as I understand fro your bio that you are busy. Thank you.