Hello,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my book and for sharing such a thoughtful and encouraging review. Your words truly mean a lot to me.
I’m really glad you enjoyed the storyline, the poetic passages, and the way emotions were conveyed. Knowing that the writing felt clear, natural, and fluid is incredibly motivating for me as a writer.
Thank you as well for your constructive feedback. Regarding the length of the chapters, this choice is intentional for now. Volumes 1 and 2 are meant to establish the universe I am building—its rules, foundations, and essence. They are designed to prepare the reader and to lay the groundwork necessary to fully understand the story as a whole.
The true central storyline begins in volume 3. This is where the story takes on its full depth, set in 2019, when a child with piercing eyes is dying. Without the events and elements established in volumes 1 and 2, this part of the story could not be fully understood, as everything that unfolds there originates in what happened before.
For this reason, the first two volumes move at a deliberately faster pace. They are not an end in themselves, but the essential foundation needed to grasp the full intensity and meaning of volume 3, which represents the true heart of the story.
I also truly appreciated your suggestion to add an introductory chapter on Greek mythology, including Olympus and the history of Zeus, Poseidon, and Hades. You are absolutely right—this kind of context can be very helpful for readers who are less familiar with this mythology, and it is a very relevant point to consider.
Once again, thank you for your kindness, support, and honest feedback. Messages like yours give me the strength to keep writing and improving.
Wishing you all the very best,
