146snak

Hi everyone, I made my first completed story, and I wanted to know if my book is worth reading so I want an honest answer from you all. If you don't like my story, write a comment and explain to me why, and I'll fix it. If you do like it, write down in the comments why and what you like about it.
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/395996734?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=146snak

146snak

Hi everyone, I made my first completed story, and I wanted to know if my book is worth reading so I want an honest answer from you all. If you don't like my story, write a comment and explain to me why, and I'll fix it. If you do like it, write down in the comments why and what you like about it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395996734?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=146snak