50ShadesofFukedup

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50ShadesofFukedup

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Check my new poem: 
          I miss the days of calm
          When my biggest worry
          Was catching a sitcom
          Now, the days are blurry
          
          The gays got murdered
          By a man who wasn't scared to go further
          Because he was in disgust 
          Yet some people think he was just
          
          The French were celebrating Bastille Day
          And the violence couldn't be held at bay
          At least eighty-four were killed
          Making our blood go chilled
          
          Blacks are being murdered left and right
          Yet so are the police
          Jesus, it's like a fucking blight
          When will this violence cease?
          
          For now, I will hold my breath
          And pray to whoever will listen
          And hope that there will be no more death
          And all of us will be forgiven

50ShadesofFukedup

My followers, if you make stories, which many of you do, please take the time to edit. If I am too tired after I write (usually late at night), I edit it sometime the next dat. Editing is so important in keeping the audience following the story, and makes the story look neater. If you think not editing makes you a good writer, you're wrong. A good example of that is my Black and Blue story, which I'm ashamed of because I didn't edit. 
          Don't be the kind of person that says you want your story to be confusing and non-edited. 
          You are an idiot if you are.

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