5secondsofsami

Update: Yeet guys gonna delete "Help." cause it makes no sense and idk what to do with it lmao. Will probably just write a new one altogether

5secondsofsami

I’ve been gone for so long guys lmao. Made a couple exterior changes to “New Girl” and I will be working on exterior changes to my other work. I will be continuing building the storyline there as well. I’m so so sorry I haven’t dont much of anything in so long. I’ve returned from the dead and I’m ready to continue working. So get ready guys. It’s gon be wild.

DeeBee_is_not_cool

Hi! Think you could give one of my 5sos books a read? It would be much appreciated. If you do, let me know of all mistakes!

5secondsofsami

@DeeBee_is_not_cool I figured much lol and it definitely worked it really got me thinking. Very interesting, keep up the good work! :)
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DeeBee_is_not_cool

@5secondsofsami Thanks! It was intentional to get the readers guessing to see if it would be an unknown character or one of the boys.
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5secondsofsami

@DeeBee_is_not_cool Alright so, once again, I'm sorry if reading your story takes a while. With everything I've got going on in one day, I'm probably going to read a chapter a day and keep you updated on my thoughts if that's okay with you! I'm currently reading your work, "Right Now", I'm totally in love with the storyline and the characters. So far, I have not seen any kind of spelling or grammatical mistakes, however, there are some parts where I would suggest maybe specifying on who is speaking or doing something. Of course, it may be pointed out later on. For example, in chapter 1, the main character said she had a friend who worked at the store she was heading to. At the time I was reading it, I had no idea you were referring to Ashton until the end, where it specifically said it was Ashton. Assuming it was intentional, it does put a unique spin on your writing style so feel free to stick to it if you'd like, this is just an opinion I had on the matter. That's all I have to say about it for now, like I said, I will do my best to keep you updated and sorry if this was a lot to take in right now! I will continue reading (I really do love this story lol) and you will hear from me again later on! Have a nice day!
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