999The_Fallen666
My 15 followers!! (No it's not much but I don't care) I'd love for you guys to read the written parts of my newest story!! I'd love to get some opinions and suggestions on it! It would especially be helpful if the people who are very good at writing could give some feedback and point out any errors for me to fix. Thank you Deadly Sinners and Lovely Angels! Remember: Second chances aren't given in the after life, they're taken by force. You rule your own eternity.