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A1mbot_R
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Coming back after 4 months to say the new book is utter dogshit. Everyone's not acting the way they normally are, like they've suddenly gone childish. One example? People who have read the book already know who's changed (for the worst) a lot. She's turned from a grown up and mature person into some emo girl which doesn't make sense. It's obvious she would open up more one day, but not in this manner. I expected Gibbs to write it in a way that she would talk more about herself bit by bit, after more emotional/dangerous sequences, not after every single fucking prompt. She's gone from having ice in her veins to becoming a girl that has confidence issues, which doesn't make sense. Now there's one more character that readers would probably have noticed changed for the worse as well. She's gone from being a friendly person that wouldn't intrude and get too comfortable to being another emo girl who cares if she's the fucking ninth wheel or some shit. The conversation both of them had at night outside the tent makes absolutely no sense and perceives them as fucking 13 year olds concerned about who to get with. Basically, everyone suddenly went from mature to immature in this book, and the second hand embarrassment I feel for Stuart Gibbs is so bad I don't even dare to mention the name of his characters now. Charlie Thorne beat this by a mile in terms of standards and quality. Up your fucking game, you're not writing for a fanfiction website.