Love you so much, boo, thank you for supporting me. I hope that you are done outlining your story because I am eager to read it, let me know if you have trouble plotting your story, I can help you. I am new here but yet, you supported me... You are my dearest one. <3
Post more, soon!!! Also, I loved the story. BTW, I did not notice anything wrong with your story! Be confident and patient and, soon, your story will be discovered, dear. Wish you the very best