@AbNominal
All works have been reverted to "unpublished status" on Wattpad. I have them posted elsewhere, and some of them might return, but for now I am looking at doing some editing and polishing and publishing them elsewhere.
If there's any question, feel free to send me a note.
A short story in a post-apocalyptic world... https://www.wattpad.com/story/97259184
"The Crying Fox" was my first attempt at writing a piece of fiction, tying together events from over a century ago to an old painting found in the basement of a store. I tried hard to keep it moving forward, but maybe the characters and or settings need more detailed descriptions? I want to maintain the reader's interest without getting to bogged down in the details. Ultimately I'd like them to want to know more about the characters than what is there. In my mind I know where they're going and have a couple of ideas of where they'll end up. However, that is not written or developed, and I don't think it will be unless something really comes together in my mind or by some miracle there is a demand for more.
What I'm most interested in is your opinion of the piece. What kept your interest or did not? What was confusing or seemed to lack enough detail for you to picture the story in your mind? And of course, did I miss a mistake with spelling or grammar?