Together alone
The author did a fantastic job crafting an entertaining and realistic tale that perfectly conveys the uncomfortable sensation of having a crush and not knowing how to approach someone you like. The story feels realistic and relatable because of the protagonist's anxious thoughts and amusing errors, such as the "pretty mascara" moment. A straightforward story about a school crush is given an intriguing sci-fi twist by the clever idea of practicing conversation through a simulation. Overall, the story keeps the reader interested in what will happen to Luz and the simulation in the future, the writing feels organic, and the character emotions are evident.
