AcireT2878

i will be updating some of my book soon, so to all that are waiting thank you for your patience

ArianneStyles57

@AcireT2878 
          	  Well i will be waitin !!!!!
          	  Please erica!!!!
          	  Please
          	  We need to talk
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ibeawesome747

I love if I could fly post soon

AcireT2878

@ibeawesome747 Don't worry about it! The story's good for a first book. Plot's unique, I like it. I think it needs more interaction with the characters like talking to each other, because we need to know the personalities especially since there are 7 of them as siblings, we have to tell them apart. The writing could do a little work. Grammar's great, don't worry about it. The spellings are what threw me off the most and I think it needs punctuation like: for speech use " but that's just my opinion. I really like it though.
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ibeawesome747

@ibeawesome747  just published part 1
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ibeawesome747

Of course I want your honest opinion of the book. It was my birthday yesterday so I got distracted. Sorry I didn't reply sooner.
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ArianneStyles57

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Ericaa 
          If you didnt unblocked me i swear im gonna die!!!!!!!!!
          We need to fuckin talk
          What happened 
          Pleasse talk to me
          Shitt...
          Erica unblock me or ill swear 
          U dont know what can i do if u didnt fuckin unblock me
          Im scared as hell , what the fuck happened to you , Erica !!!!!
          GODDAMN IT 
          WE NEED TO SOLVE THIS
           YOU NEED TO STAY WITH US!!!!
          DONT YOU DO THIS TO ME
          OR I SWEAR IM NOT GONNA BE ABLE TO FORGIVE YOU
          PLEASE ERICA
          IM YOUR FUCKIN BESTFRIEND SNAP THE HELL OUT OF IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
          GODDAMN IT ERICA!!!!!!
          LISTEN TO ME FOR ONCE 
          UNBLOCK ME
          WELL TALK
          FIGURED OUT THIS WAY
          AND BE FRIENDS AGAIN....
          WHAT ABOUT THE DREAMS WE HAD
          WHAT ABOUT THE BOYS, OUR BOYS!!!!
          DO YOU THINK THELL BE HAPPY , FOR WHAT YOURE DOIN RIGHT NOW 
          UNBLOCK ME!!!
          NOW