Adriana González

Hello! Thank you for the many votes on my story! I hope you enjoy(ed) reading it!

Thanks for adding my story to your list! And you teach Chinese? Thats wonderful! I can speak it too.
          
          我也很爱看书！

@Reaper333
          Thanks for stoping by. Looking forward to reading more of your work. 

Hello! I wanted to stop by and thank you for supporting "A Journey." I hope that you continue to leave your thoughts so that I can improve the blog when I rewrite it. I'm grateful for all the time and effort you put into your comments, so thank you. Also, thank you for the follow! I means a lot to me that you'd support me like that, so do come by for a chat if you find yourself with some free time.
          Reaper333

@michellezdong 
          Waiting for that update. Actually that first working title would have caught my attention immediately. Good luck on that writing. Don't want to mess with your work, I'm sure you'll find a title that's funny, attractive yet not so obvious. Best of lucks!

@michellezdong 
          Dear Michelle:
          Lastly 哈哈： I find that bicultural people like yourself become aware of this when they date and, most importantly, when they decide to raise kids. Maybe you've read Tiger mom, I think it describes the situation to some extent. Anyway, just a random thought. And now for some Chinglish: add oil!

@michellezdong 
          Dear Michelle:
          Glad you liked my comment. I forgot to add 2 things. One: your new cover depicts more clearly what you are doing with your work than the original one. At first glance I thought your work would be one more historical piece. (I know your mom doesn't see it that way). Also, I like the title but I have some doubts about it, because it doesn't show you are actually trying to find a Chinese gentleman. I was fooled by this at first too. I thought your book would trace the life of a particular gentleman. Just a thought. It's just both the title and the cover are so important to selling the book and getting more readers, plus they induce some preconceived thoughts about the genre and the time frame where the action will take place...Finally, about that chaper 31: not sure if you were clear in your head about what was happening and what your motivations were. Maybe the facts are still not clear to you and that's why you found hard putting it in writing. Just a thought there too. So, waiting for a yummy update! 

@michellezdong 亲爱的Michelle:
          
          让你久等了，不好意思。I've thought about your question and I find no fault in your writing. I like how you sound so authentic. I like all the cultural insights and how you are trying to find yourself and telling all about it, describing all your prospects and analyzing them. Don't know if you've read Prozac Nation but I think that the author described her generation's angst, and you are doing the same thing in your own way. I specially liked the part where you described the friends who lead 2 very different lifestyles and how you are choosing between them. So 加油。 

ok Anna thx for voting for all tge chapters n especially chapter 31. plz tell me what u think of it?

@michellezdong 亲爱的Michelle:
          
          我现在看你写的文章。挺有意思！刚开始我以为你的作品关于中国历史因为题目和封面有一种比较古老的味道。然后你改了封面所以我一下子开始读。感觉挺好！因为你是在中国长大了然后去加拿大回到祖国我觉得你的看法很有特色。我看你的角度不是西方人的，也不太像中国女孩。这挺有趣。通过你的作品我了解一下华人怎么看今天的中国。你也帮我提高中国文化水平因为你去的地方虽然我也去过，但没有人给我好好解释。比方说，不知道云南这地名的来源，现在知道了。希望咱们可以成为好友。好了，不打扰你了，先写到这儿。希望你继续写。㊗️你愉快。（你可以叫我安娜，那是我的中文名字）88