I'm afraid I’m too busy to accept reading requests, but if you're looking for ways to get more feedback, I've written a guide to help new authors. There's a lot of really great advice, including all the ways I’ve promoted my own stories, and it's a short read. I think you’ll find it helpful
http://www.wattpad.com/story/11752550-how-to-get-reads-votes-and-comments-a-guide