Akira_Otsutsuki
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Ya'll, I just read a story that used Ai. What's the point of publishing an Ai story?? That's disrespectful to everyone who spends hours writing chapters and fighting writers block.
Lwkey, what made me realize it was Ai wasn't the punctuation or the grammar, but the fact that there were so many plot holes, the characters presented themselves in a manner that seemed a bit too... lifeless. Idk hw to explain it. When I read, usually I feel a certain emotion. Happiness. Sadness. Boredom. Anything. That story made me feel nothing. I was constantly confused as to what is going on. And the timeline was so fucked it made it hard to figure out if some events actually happened or not.
Good potential tho. It was an MHA fanfic and it had a good idea for a quirk, a good character. It's just that the writing is lifeless. I would feel a bit better if there was an Authors note but the author answers no comments, does not leave authors notes, and is just nonexistent in their own book.
Like the whole account was run by a bot.
But Idk. Some people may have enjoyed it but I just wanted to vent about this. If Ai truly wasn't used I'm sorry for assuming.
Btw the story is Apex Hero, the character has a quirk called Vector. It's also a reincarnation/isekai.