AlainDucret

And another chapter published with on my short story Pina Colada Texting :)
          	There will probably be two, maximum three chapters left and then I'll be done ;)
          	Enjoy your read and don't hesitate to coment and vote!
          	
          	<iframe width="500" height="280" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen="" src="https://embed.wattpad.com/story/257679649" ></iframe>

AlainDucret

I am very bad at this embadding thing, so here's the link to the first chapter :
          	  https://www.wattpad.com/1021729998-pi%C3%B1a-colada-texting-author%27s-note
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AlainDucret

And another chapter published with on my short story Pina Colada Texting :)
          There will probably be two, maximum three chapters left and then I'll be done ;)
          Enjoy your read and don't hesitate to coment and vote!
          
          <iframe width="500" height="280" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen="" src="https://embed.wattpad.com/story/257679649" ></iframe>

AlainDucret

I am very bad at this embadding thing, so here's the link to the first chapter :
            https://www.wattpad.com/1021729998-pi%C3%B1a-colada-texting-author%27s-note
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AlainDucret

AlainDucret

Hey! :)
          I just published a new story in a different tone than my current ones: no jokes and no sexual content ^^ 
          
          This will be a short story (I'm thinking 4 chapters at least, 10 at the most):
          
          What happens when love's spark is forgotten and only old words, and a habit filed tenderness remain?
          What happens when passion is but an old dream involving people you don't recognize anymore?
          What happens when routine eroded everything you dreamed about?
          
          James' answer to these questions will take him on the edge of the promises he wishes to keep. When  the future of his mariage hangs by a thread, salvation may come from unexpected places: a dreamlike woman and her texts, an old song and a piña colada..."

AlainDucret

@ actuallyizzy  thanks ! :)
            By the way how is you writers block?
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actuallyizzy

@AlainDucret just saw this, sorry! i'll go check the story out! xx
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AlainDucret

Now that I keep writing it, "no joke" may have been wrong, but less jokes than in the Temporary Demon Lord, at least it's not a parody of the content it takes inspiration from (in this case, a song... maybe you'll find out which before the story ends, otherwise you'll discover it at the same time than James ;) )
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AlainDucret

Hey!
          I was wondering about something and would like your opinion on it:
          => Are my chapters too long? I was wondering about splitting them up to fit a format friendlier to those reading on their phone or in the transports.
          
          What do you think? :)

AlainDucret

@KnettiJanssens thanks, I’ll probably have to cut some chapters in two then  I’ll work on that!
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AlainDucret

I just changed the covers of both my story, I hope you guys like it :)
          Either way, don't hesitate to give me your opinion !

KnettiJanssens

@AlainDucret What's with that tag on the cover of "The Temporary Demon Lord" xD ?! Damn it! I really need to read on!
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KnettiJanssens

Thank you for your patronage! It is much appreciated  I know my story will grow much better for it.

AlainDucret

@KnettiJanssens Well I sure hope I haven't :D
            But do tell me if it feels like that (so far my friends have liked it even when they were rather biased towards erotic content but it doesn't mean everybody would like it)
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KnettiJanssens

Somehow, I’m not surprised to hear that!  No worries, I’ll still be giving it a read. (I sure hope you haven’t written tasteless porn, thought... )
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AlainDucret

@KnettiJanssens Oh, and be advised that there is a (in)decent amount of sexual content in that other story (as in a chapter out of two or three). The story is about love but the mature part isn't filtered out ^^
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